Thursday, February 26, 2009

Lede writing 4, 5

4. A state representative is sponsoring a bill that will establish a web site that increases penalties for identify theft and raises crime for a misdemeanor to a felony.

5. The Maryland Department of Education is awarding more than $30 million in federal grant money to 53 school districts to help innovative programs.

1 comment:

  1. Great job writing active voice, SVO ledes Jenna! Let's fix two small issues in class: 1) writing a full sentence, not a headline in #4 and 2) the AP style for money in #5.

    Good work here!

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